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COMPUTERS Do you think computers help society? Do you think computers are bad for health? How do you think computers have changed the world?

COMPUTERS Do you think computers help society? Do you think computers are bad for health? How do you think computers have changed the world? AaJ7e

Computers play a major role in the life of every modern person. It can be explained the fact that computers help people to do their work much more easily and quickly. Almost everyone has at least one computer can be used for work, study and communication. Using a computer, you can search something on the internet. I think computers help society in many ways. It made our communication easier and faster. It also helps to be in touch each other and share ideas and experience. We can say computers are bad for our health, but it may be in some cases. For example If you use the computer for a long time, it can be negative for your eyesight and brain. With the advent of computers, our life has changed radically. As I said before, computers have made our life more easily to communicate and do our work faster. Also with the advent of computers, I suppose, in the businesses area and not only it, become easier to calculate the budget of company and much more. After all, computers have become the most useful device for everyone nowadays and it has certainly changed our lives for the better.

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