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Write your email to Sam using all the notes.

Write your email to Sam using all the notes. OE6Ay

Hi sam, It is a great idea to have a leaving party for Jan. About the place to hold the party, I suggest that the Kong restaurant. It is an authentic Chinese cuisine restaurant and I remember Jan really like Chinese food. I think we should have it at the weekend because on the weekdays they have to go to school. Jan's favourite singer is Taylor and she is a pop singer. Probably, he like that kind of music. But I don't know that local brand can sing this music. If you know, please inform me. let me know if you need some help. Nice hearing from you. kit

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Nice hearing from you.

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IELTS letter Write your email to Sam using all the notes.

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American English

6 paragraphs

108 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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