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A museum near you is looking for volunteers. write a letter to apply for the voluntary work

A museum near you is looking for volunteers. write a letter to apply for the voluntary work 8J6BG

I am writing to notify you of my interest in the voluntary work your museum recently advertised. I am a retired government worker who is now full time at home enjoying my hobbies and being relaxed. I have worked in many top museums in Florida and other states both paid and voluntary basis. I do have approx. one years of experience in the parish church working as a sacristy on voluntary basis. I am a soft spoken and having good work ethics and well-disciplined in my work. I enjoy whatever the task given to me with legitimately. Furthermore, I studied archeology during my collage days and that was my best interest and now it has been my hobby. I am living 2 plots away down the hill street, very close approximate to the museum campus. Its walkable distance to the venue and there should not be any problem getting in to work on time. Looking forward for a favorable reply from you soon. Yours faithfully, Shane

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work
 your museum recently advertised.

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good
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work
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now
 it has been my hobby. I am living 2 plots away down the hill street, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 close approximate to the museum campus. Its walkable distance to the venue and there should not be any problem getting in to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 on time.

Looking forward for a favorable reply from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Shane