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You have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town Centre is different from most other town centers. Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

You have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town Centre is different from most other town centers. Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article. kbd6O
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Sandaruwani Sumanapala who is the resident in the Kandy city for the several years. Actually, I decided to write to you is I am unable to shut my voice after reading your recent article about our city as there are some distinctive areas where you should be aware well. Even though there are particularly common aspects are equal to other city centers such as the traffic congestions and the air pollution, my city is a prominent place in the Sri Lankan context. As far as I am concerned that Kandy is the most favorite tourism destination due to the grate historical plus archeological value of kingdom where other rival cities are unable to cope with. The similarities which you have pointed are so true because we always have tremendous circumstances in our daily lives. What is more, the air contamination of the Kandy is a well-recognized environmental problem while the scientists are struggling to find a proper solution. However, as a tour guide I would love to show you the astonished historical masterpieces of Kandy if you have the time on this weekend. Actually, it would be more worthwhile for your next edition by addressing infrequent surroundings where our town centre already has. I hope you would certainly accept the invitation that I offer. Yours’ faithfully Sandaruwani Sumanapala
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am
Sandaruwani
Sumanapala
who is the resident in the
Kandy
city for the several years. Actually, I decided to write to you is I am unable to shut my voice after reading your recent article about our city as there are
some
distinctive areas where you should be aware well.

Even though
there are
particularly
common aspects are equal to other city centers such as the traffic congestions and the air pollution, my city is a prominent place in the Sri Lankan context. As far as I
am concerned
that
Kandy
is the most favorite tourism destination due to the grate historical plus archeological value of kingdom where other rival
cities
are unable to cope with.

The similarities which you have pointed are
so
true
because
we always have tremendous circumstances in our daily
lives
.
What is more
, the air contamination of the
Kandy
is a well-recognized environmental problem while the scientists are struggling to find a proper solution.

However
, as a tour guide I would
love
to
show
you the astonished historical masterpieces of
Kandy
if you have the time on this weekend. Actually, it would be more worthwhile for your
next
edition by addressing infrequent surroundings where our town
centre
already has.

I hope you would
certainly
accept the invitation that I offer.

Yours’
faithfully


Sandaruwani
Sumanapala
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IELTS letter You have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town Centre is different from most other town centers. Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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