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write a thank you letter to your mentor and atten her anniversary

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Dear Mr. Tam I am writing to you to say how thankful I am for the mentorship you’ve given me over the past year. Having the opportunity to learn from you has made a substantial change in my start up. I'll have an anniversary party at 2: pm on next saturday at Mison Hotel. Some my old collegue have been invited, too. In the party I'll make a tiny game. You'll definitely like it. After the party we'll come to the beach. I’m looking forward to seeing you Regards, Thao
Dear Mr. Tam

I am writing to you to say how thankful I am for the mentorship you’ve
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me over the past year. Having the opportunity to learn from you has made a substantial
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make
a tiny game. You'll definitely like it.
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the party we'll
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to the beach.

I’m looking forward to seeing you

Regards,

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Thao
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IELTS letter write a thank you letter to your mentor and atten her anniversary

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  American English
4 paragraphs
89 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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