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write a thank you letter to your mentor and atten her anniversary

write a thank you letter to your mentor and atten her anniversary 0MrM5

Dear Mr. Tam I am writing to you to say how thankful I am for the mentorship you’ve given me over the past year. Having the opportunity to learn from you has made a substantial change in my start up. I'll have an anniversary party at 2: pm on next saturday at Mison Hotel. Some my old collegue have been invited, too. In the party I'll make a tiny game. You'll definitely like it. After the party we'll come to the beach. I’m looking forward to seeing you Regards, Thao

Dear Mr. Tam

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given
 me over the past year. Having the opportunity to learn from you has made a substantial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 up.

I'll have an anniversary party at 2: pm on next
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saturday
 at Possible spelling mistake found.MasonBisonMesonMi son
Mison
 Hotel. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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collegue
 have been invited
, too. In the party I'll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a tiny game. You'll definitely like it. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 the party we'll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to the beach.

I’m looking forward to seeing you

Regards,

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Thao

IELTS letter write a thank you letter to your mentor and atten her anniversary

Letter

American English

4 paragraphs

89 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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