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Write a letter to a friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party

Write a letter to a friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party PMAkw

Dear Rohan, Hope you are doing great. I still miss our college days, it was a great time to have a lot of fun. I am writing a letter to need your assistant to get a recipe of Hyderabadi biryani which I enjoyed many times with you and your family at your home when I was in India. Actually, I am planning to arrange a small dinner party at my home in next month and I would like to consider this recipe in my dinner menu. I would invite my boss and office collogues and I am sure that they would love this recipe and enjoy the same. Before, I did try to prepare when my parents was came here. But I couldn’t able to prepare authentically. Can you please share the recipe with proper instruction, list of ingredients in order to prepare in the right way? I hope you will forward recipe detail which I actually needed as soon as possible. Give my regards to your parents. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours truly

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Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours truly