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How have you been? I hope you are doing great. Sorry for not writing earlier but I have been quite busy. Now I’m writing to you from Hawaii. My first impressions are very good. Hawaii is definitely a well-known place with breathtaking scenery. The beaches are very stunning. It is the perfect place to unwind and disconnect from my daily route. I really love spending time to sunbathe on the beach. In addition, floating on inflatable mattress is so relaxing for me. Some other enjoy going on a sailboat ride. It so much fun and such a great adventure. There are so many lovely seashells on the shore. And I have collected some shells already. Furthermore, the local people are also friendly and kindly. One of my favorite activities was snorkeling two days ago. I was very interested in this activity. I had a chance to see the beauty of Hawaiian marine life. I can memorize by seeing and observing so many beautiful creatures in their natural habitat. Underwater life was so magical and mysterious. Snorkeling opens a whole new word to me. Tomorrow I am going to visit some unique islands here. That would be fascinating for me. That’s all for me now.
How have you been? I hope you are doing great. Sorry for not writing earlier
but
I have been quite busy.
Now
I’m writing to you from Hawaii.

My
first
impressions are
very
good
. Hawaii is definitely a well-known place with breathtaking scenery. The beaches are
very
stunning. It is the perfect place to unwind and disconnect from my daily route. I
really
love
spending time to sunbathe on the beach.
In addition
, floating on inflatable mattress is
so
relaxing for me.
Some
other
enjoy going on a sailboat ride. It
so
much fun and such a great adventure. There are
so
many
lovely seashells on the shore. And I have collected
some
shells already.
Furthermore
, the local
people
are
also
friendly and kindly.

One of my favorite activities was snorkeling two days ago. I was
very
interested in this activity. I had a chance to
see
the beauty of Hawaiian marine life.
I
can memorize by seeing and observing
so
many
beautiful
creatures in their natural habitat. Underwater life was
so
magical and mysterious. Snorkeling opens a whole new word to me. Tomorrow I am going to visit
some
unique islands here. That would be fascinating for me.

That’s all for me
now
.
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IELTS letter write a letter to your parents

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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