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Your friend would like to find some quality websites where he/she can read up on what’s happening in the world. He/she has written to you asking for some advice. Write a letter to your friend giving some advice. In your letter • include websites you recommend • say why you recommend them • give some other ideas which you think may be useful

Your friend would like to find some quality websites where he/she can read up on what’s happening in the world. He/she has written to you asking for some advice. Write a letter to your friend giving some advice. In your letter • include websites you recommend • say why you recommend them • give some other ideas which you think may be useful OlAR3
Dear Alex, I hope things are fine with you. Yesterday, I read your letter in which you have asked me to propose some useful site where you could get daily news. In this regard, I’d like you to visit the web pages of a few news channels, such as the daily tribune and the dawn, which will provide you the information related to the major activities around the world. Let me explain you the reasons behind recommending these sites. Firstly, these are the websites which are regulated by approved authorities; therefore, only verified data from competent representatives are presented on these links. Moreover, the government has a strict watch on such websites, as they are governed under the rules of public representatives. Furthermore, I’ve a firm believe that you should use some other sources to get yourself aware of the world news. I’m providing you a few references of these as well; that is, the social media which includes the facebook and the twitter, and the television channels. If I can tell you something else, please call me. Yours truly, Jay
Dear Alex,

I hope things are fine with you. Yesterday, I read your letter in which you have asked me to propose
some
useful site where you could
get
daily news. In this regard, I’d like you to visit the web pages of
a few news
channels, such as the daily tribune and the dawn, which will provide you the information related to the major activities around the world.

Let
me
explain
you
the reasons behind recommending these sites.
Firstly
, these are the websites which
are regulated
by approved authorities;
therefore
,
only
verified data from competent representatives
are presented
on these links.
Moreover
, the
government
has a strict
watch
on such websites, as they
are governed
under the
rules
of public representatives.

Furthermore
, I’ve a firm believe that you should
use
some
other sources to
get
yourself aware of the world news. I’m providing you a few references of these
as well
;
that is
, the social media which includes the
facebook
and the twitter, and the television channels.

If I can
tell
you something else,
please
call me.

Yours
truly
,

Jay
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IELTS letter Your friend would like to find some quality websites where he/she can read up on what’s happening in the world. He/she has written to you asking for some advice. Write a letter to your friend giving some advice. In your letter • include websites you recommend • say why you recommend them • give some other ideas which you think may be useful

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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