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A friend from another country moving to your city

A friend from another country moving to your city 2615M

Dear Steven, I am very glad and super excited to hear that you will be moving India and that do in my city, Pune. so congratulations on your new job. I am assuming that you will be probably working in the series center, perhaps you could think about leaving near me in Aksharchawk. It is a Porsche and well known area in Pune also it is very popular for food chains such as Starbucks magdi and KFC so you do not need to go far to eat such stuff. If I talk about a public transport you can travel anywhere in Pune by using bus and Metro I advise you to buy a monthly pass so that you don't not need to buy ticket every time when you hop on the bus or a metro, also try to avoid peak hours commuting because it is little bit crowded but I bet it is better from any other city in India. I know that you are very extrovert person and you like to make new friends, so I will introduce you to with my friends and I am sure that you are going to meet new people in your workplace. Anyways signing off right now cannot wait to see you next month have a safe flight to India Best wishes Raj

Dear Steven,

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 you do not need to go far to eat such stuff.

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 extrovert person and you like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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 new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 in your workplace.

Anyways signing off right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
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 cannot wait to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
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 you next
 month have a safe flight to India

Best wishes

Raj