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You have jusst come back from San Francisco. When you were there, your friend Mr.Jackson gave you s great deal of help. Write to Mr.Jackson to thank him for his hospitality and help..

You have jusst come back from San Francisco. When you were there, your friend Mr. Jackson gave you s great deal of help. Write to Mr. Jackson to thank him for his hospitality and help. . JLXAE
Dear Mr. Jackson, I writing this letter to thank you for your hospitality and help. This is the frist time I came to San Francisco, everything was strange and hard for me. During my stay, you let me live into your home. Not only that, you gave me some very good advice to where to go visit in San Francisco. At the weekend, you drove me to visit the Golden Gate Brige, is a very beautiful places, so that I had a wonderful time in the city. I will keep this embalm and hope that we can met someday. Again with my thanks to your hospitality, i hope you will give me the chance to return your kindness. Please have no hesitation in writing to me should you want me to do something for you in Vietnam. your friend Trang
Dear Mr. Jackson,
Did you mean "I'm writing", "I am writing", or "I was writing"?
I writing
this letter to thank you for your hospitality and
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help
. This is the
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frist
time I came to San Francisco, everything was strange and
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hard
for me. During my stay, you
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let
me
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live
into your home. Not
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only
that, you gave me
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some
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very
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good
advice to where to go visit in San Francisco. At the weekend, you drove me to visit the Golden Gate
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Brige
, is a
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very
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beautiful
places,
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so
that I had a wonderful time in the city. I will
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keep
The verb 'embalm' is plural. Did you mean: "this embalms"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
this embalm
and hope that we can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "meet"
met
someday. Again with my thanks to your hospitality,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
hope you will give me the chance to return your kindness.
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Please
have no hesitation in writing to me should you want me to do something for you in Vietnam.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
your
friend
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Trang
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IELTS letter You have jusst come back from San Francisco. When you were there, your friend Mr. Jackson gave you s great deal of help. Write to Mr. Jackson to thank him for his hospitality and help. .

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  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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