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You go to a park for morning walk where you see some boys do anti-social activities. Write a letter to a leading newspaper newspaper editor for publishing this story. In your letter Explain the situation

You go to a park for morning walk where you see some boys do anti-social activities. Write a letter to a leading newspaper newspaper editor for publishing this story. In your letter Explain the situation 2r7Ab

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to outline the inconvenience faced by the dwellers while walking in the Hanging Garden. I seek your help in publishing this story in your reputed newspaper. From 10 last years, I have been going to the park for morning walk regularly. Recently, I observed that a number of school going boys, I am sure they bunk off school come in a group and create nuisance in the garden. Smoking is strictly prohibited, yet they smoke in the park. Though numerous people advised them not to smoke, on the contrary they tangle with those who oppose it. Furthermore, it has been observed that they play cards not merely for the sake of fun but for gambling. Gambling is something unacceptable at the public places. Also, it is against the law and prohibited. Attached herewith the pictures taken while they were caught red-handed in the park doing anti-social activities, which are immensely causing trouble to the senior citizens. I never wanted to publish this in the new paper as they are young and awaiting their bright future, but this has to be stopped so that they should not commit any serious crime. I solicit your co-operation. Yours faithfully, Nainpreet

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to outline the inconvenience faced by the dwellers while walking in the Hanging Garden. I seek your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in publishing this story in your reputed newspaper.

From 10 last years, I have been going to the park for morning walk regularly
. Recently, I observed that a number of school going boys, I am sure they bunk off school This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 in a group and create nuisance in the garden.

Smoking is strictly
 prohibited, yet
 they smoke in the park. Though numerous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 advised them not to smoke, on the contrary
 they tangle with those who oppose it.

Furthermore
, it has been observed
 that they play cards not merely
 for the sake of fun This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 for gambling. Gambling is something unacceptable at the public places. Also
, it is against the law and prohibited.

Attached herewith the pictures taken while they were caught
 red-handed in the park doing anti-social activities, which are immensely
 causing trouble to the senior citizens.

I never wanted to publish this in the new paper as they are young and awaiting their bright future, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they should not commit any serious crime.

I solicit your co-operation.

Yours faithfully
,

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Nainpreet