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Write to Mr.Jackson a letter to thank him for his hospitality and help when you are in San Francisco

Write to Mr. Jackson a letter to thank him for his hospitality and help when you are in San Francisco 2r7pM
Dear Mr. Jackson, I am writing this letter for thank you for your hospitality and help me when I am staying in San Francisco. During my stay, you let me to live in your house, that is a big honor. Not only that, you gave me a number of advice to were to go visit in San Francisco. At the weekend, you drove me go to many places, but the most impressive was the Golden Gate Bridge. Thanks to you, I had a wonderful time in the city. Once again with my thanks to your hospitality, I hope you will give me a chance to return your kindness. Please have hesitation in writing to me should you want me to do something for you in Vietnam. Your friend Trang!
Dear Mr. Jackson, I am writing this letter for thank you for your hospitality and
help
me when I am staying in San Francisco. During my stay, you
let
me to
live
in your
house
,
that is
a
big
honor. Not
only
that, you gave me
a number of advice
to
were
to go visit in San Francisco. At the weekend, you drove me go to
many
places,
but
the most impressive was the Golden Gate Bridge. Thanks to you, I had a wonderful time in the city. Once again with my thanks to your hospitality, I hope you will give me a chance to return your kindness.
Please
have hesitation in writing to me should you want me to do something for you in Vietnam. Your friend
Trang
!
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IELTS letter Write to Mr. Jackson a letter to thank him for his hospitality and help when you are in San Francisco

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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