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From: Mary Subject: Birthday meal

From: Mary Subject: Birthday meal 3x2Jm

Dear Robbie, Glad to write an email to you. It’s been a long time I haven’twritten to you. How are you, Robbie? I hope you’re well. I want we have a lot of fun in your birthday. So I think eating in restaurant is a good idea. Because the food is not only delicious but also very beautiful. We’re going to decorate the restaurant to make it prettier. I now that all of us don’t like to eat vegetarian food. So I want to eat in buger restaurant. Because Everyone wants to try some different kinds of burgers. Can we go to restaurant together? Because my bicycle is broken and the restaurant is far away so I can’t walk Can you offer the food? Because I see in the menu is lots of delicious food. Write me soon, Love, Mary.

Dear Robbie,

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haven
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twritten
 to you. How are you, Robbie? I hope you’re well.

I want we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 fun The usual preposition for "birthdays" is "on".  Revise: "on your birthday".on your birthday
in your birthday
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 eating in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoffee shopbardinerjointinnoutlet
restaurant
 is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 the food is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 delicious This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
. We’re going to decorate the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoffee shopbardinerjointinnoutlet
restaurant
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it prettier.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 that all of us don’t like to eat vegetarian food. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I want to eat in Possible spelling mistake found.buyerBurgerburgerLugerBuberauger
buger
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoffee shopbardinerjointinnoutlet
restaurant
. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 Everyone wants to try This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 kinds of burgers.

Can we go to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoffee shopbardinerjointinnoutlet
restaurant
 together? This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 my bicycle is broken
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoffee shopbardinerjointinnoutlet
restaurant
 is far away This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can’t Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphwalk.walk!walk?walk:walk,walk;
walk


Can you offer the food? “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 in the menu is lots of delicious food.

Write me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
,

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
,

Mary. 