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Write a letter to the newspaper editor about an experience you had at a restaurant. The experience can be good or bad. Describe your experience in detail and state whether or not you recommend others to visit the restaurant.

Write a letter to the newspaper editor about an experience you had at a restaurant. The experience can be good or bad. Describe your experience in detail and state whether or not you recommend others to visit the restaurant. bE0E3
To The Editor, I am writing this letter to bring to your notice regarding the experience I had in a restaurant recently. As you publish the dinning recommendations, I hope my experience would be helpful for others as well. I went to dine in The Chines Wok restaurant along with my friends and family on weekend. I made the reservation 2 weeks prior as this gathering was important for me. In spite of booking the table formerly, we were asked to dine separately as there were no tables of suitable size. Furthermore, most of the dishes on the menu were not available and also the service was delayed. I spoke to the manager about the discomfort and dissatisfaction we are facing but did not get a convincing response from him. I agree that the food which was available is delicious but to me service also lies in the top list for a running a restaurant. I would recommend a takeaway for people who want lip smacking food and wants to spend some quality time with their loved ones, but this restaurant is not recommended for those who are in large number and prefers good service. Yours faithfully, Sahithi
To The Editor,

I am writing this letter to bring to your notice regarding the experience I had in a restaurant recently. As you publish the dinning recommendations, I hope my experience would be helpful for others
as well
.

I went to dine in The Chines Wok restaurant along with my friends and family on weekend. I made the reservation 2 weeks prior as this gathering was
important
for me.
In spite of
booking the table
formerly
, we
were asked
to dine
separately
as there were no tables of suitable size.
Furthermore
, most of the dishes on the menu were not available and
also
the service
was delayed
.

I spoke to the manager about the discomfort and dissatisfaction we are facing
but
did not
get
a convincing response from him. I
agree
that the food which was available is delicious
but
to me service
also
lies in the top list for a running a restaurant.

I
would recommend a takeaway for
people
who want lip smacking food and wants to spend
some
quality time with their
loved
ones,
but
this restaurant is not recommended for those who are in large number and prefers
good
service.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sahithi
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the newspaper editor about an experience you had at a restaurant. The experience can be good or bad. Describe your experience in detail and state whether or not you recommend others to visit the restaurant.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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