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You were on flight 302 to Tokyo when you lost an item of luggage.Write a letter to the airline describing the object and giving information on how you can be reached if it is found.

You were on flight 302 to Tokyo when you lost an item of luggage. Write a letter to the airline describing the object and giving information on how you can be reached if it is found. JL9K5
Dear Sir. I am writing this letter to inquire about my lost luggage which I left during my flight from Uzbekistan to Tokyo last week. I lost my luggage on 18 th May and I am sure I forgot it on the plane. The item is very important to me because it is a gift from my late mother. It is a navy blue luggage with double locks and it contains some important documents, a diary, clothes and my laptop that I use at work. So, I would deeply appreciate it if you could give me a prompt reply at your earliest convenience. My luggage claim number was 19861 and I can be contacted on my mobile phone, which is +998911466155, anytime. Thank you for giving the matter your attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yourth Faithfully.
Dear Sir.

I am writing this letter to inquire about my lost
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luggage
which I
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left
during my flight from Uzbekistan to Tokyo last week. I lost my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
luggage
on
Did you mean "18th"?
18 th
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May and
I am sure I forgot it on the
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plane
. The item is
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very
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important
to me
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because
it is a gift from my late mother. It is a navy blue
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luggage
with double locks and it contains
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some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
documents, a diary, clothes and my laptop that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
at work.
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So
, I would
deeply
appreciate it if you could give me a prompt reply at your earliest convenience. My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
luggage
claim number was 19861 and I can
be contacted
on my mobile phone, which is +998911466155, anytime. Thank you for giving the matter your attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Yourth
Faithfully
.

IELTS letter You were on flight 302 to Tokyo when you lost an item of luggage. Write a letter to the airline describing the object and giving information on how you can be reached if it is found.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
141 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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