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A large company needs an English speaking assistant for a project

A large company needs an English speaking assistant for a project k5mwd
Dear sir or Madam I am very interested in your advertisement in today's edition of local newspaper The Navbahor and I would like to apply for the position as a personal assistant. I am twenty eight years old and obtained a degree in Teaching English as a Fireign Language in Kokand Pedagogical Insitute in 2015. At present I work at Touristic company as a translator. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develip my skills in a dynamic commercial team. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed fir this job. I can speak fluently three languages Uzbek, English and German also I am sociable and I can get on well with new people easily. In addition to this I have participated in Computer Course. I believe that my academic qualifications and experience would be of benefit to your company. If you find my skills and experience suitable, I would be able to come at any time convenient to yoy, as I do want to be a member of your company. I would be greateful if you could consider me fir this position. Yours faithfully. Flora Watson.
Dear sir or Madam I am
very
interested in your advertisement in
today
's edition of local newspaper The
Navbahor
and I would like to apply for the position as a personal assistant. I am
twenty eight
years
old
and obtained a degree in Teaching English as a
Fireign
Language in
Kokand
Pedagogical
Insitute
in 2015. At
present I
work at Touristic
company
as a translator. I am
currently
looking for a position that will
allow
me to
develip
my
skills
in a dynamic commercial team. I feel I have
many
of the
important
qualifications needed fir this job.
I
can speak
fluently
three languages Uzbek, English and German
also
I am sociable and I can
get
on well with new
people
easily
.
In addition
to this I have participated in Computer Course. I believe that my academic qualifications and experience would be of benefit to your
company
. If you find my
skills
and experience suitable, I would be able to
come
at any time convenient to
yoy
, as I do want to be a member of your
company
. I would be
greateful
if you could consider me fir this position. Yours
faithfully
. Flora Watson.
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IELTS letter A large company needs an English speaking assistant for a project

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
194 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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