Dear Annie,
I hope you are doing fine. I am excited to have you with me in a few days. Yesterday, I received your letter in which you have asked for the direction to my house from the airport. Please do not worry about that; I will come to the airport to pick you up. I am eagerly waiting to have you at my house and spend some excellent time together.
I am really looking forward to meeting you and I have planned a few things for us. We can go to Mysore for a day trip. Mysore has a beautiful palace and a Zoo; which is a house of some exotic animals. Then I have also planned a 3 days' trip to Ooty. Ooty is known as "Queens of Hills" and has pristine tea gardens and mesmerising views. I am sure you will love it.
Since Ooty is a cold and hilly place, please get some winter clothing and comfortable shoes. One thick jacket and a sweater would be good. Besides, you should bring any medicine you take as you won't be able to purchase any medicine without a prescription.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
With love,
Preeti
Dear Annie,
I hope you are doing fine. I
am excited
to have you with me in a few days. Yesterday, I received your letter in which you have
asked for
the direction to my
house
from the airport.
Please
do not worry about that; I will
come
to the airport to pick you up. I am
eagerly
waiting to have you at my
house
and spend
some
excellent time together.
I am
really
looking forward to meeting you and I have planned a few things for us. We can go to Mysore for a day trip. Mysore has a
beautiful
palace and a Zoo; which is a
house
of
some
exotic animals. Then I have
also
planned a 3 days' trip to
Ooty
.
Ooty
is known
as
"
Queens of Hills
"
and has pristine tea gardens and
mesmerising
views. I am sure you will
love
it.
Since
Ooty
is a
cold
and hilly place,
please
get
some
winter clothing and comfortable shoes. One thick jacket and a sweater would be
good
.
Besides
, you should bring any medicine you take as you won't be able to
purchase
any medicine without a prescription.
Looking forward to meeting you
soon
.
With
love
,
Preeti
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