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You have invited a friend to come to your house next holiday. He/she has asked you how to get to your house from the airport. However, you are going to the airport to receive him/her. v.2

You have invited a friend to come to your house next holiday. He/she has asked you how to get to your house from the airport. However, you are going to the airport to receive him/her. v. 2
Dear Alison, I am quite excited about your visit to my house during the coming summer holidays. If there is no change in your flight schedule, I take it that you will come to visit me on 18th August. I also understand that you want the direction to my house from the airport. But, I think that it would be better if I come to the airport and pick you up instead. Just to let you know a little about my plans, I will take you to a nice restaurant for dinner, after your arrival, where we will enjoy Italian food. The next morning, we will hit the road to travel to the most popular sea beach in my country which you have always wanted to visit. We will also visit a theatre to enjoy a movie, go to the museum and try some local food. Also, please don’t forget to bring some clothes suitable for summer since the summers in my country are really hot unlike the summer weather in your country. Also, bring your prescription if you want to buy any medicine from here. Take care. Can't wait to meet you. Warm wishes, Adam Spencer
Dear Alison,

I am quite excited about your
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visit
to my
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house
during the coming
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summer
holidays. If there is no
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change
in your flight schedule, I take it that you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to
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visit
me on 18th August. I
also
understand that you want the direction to my
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house
from the airport.
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But
, I
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think
that it would be better if I
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come
to the airport and pick you up
instead
.

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Just
to
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let
you know a
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little
about my plans, I will take you to a nice restaurant for dinner, after your arrival, where we will enjoy Italian food. The
next
morning, we will hit the road to travel to the most popular sea beach in my country which you have always wanted to
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visit
. We will
also
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visit
a
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theatre
to enjoy a movie, go to the museum and try
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some
local food.

Also
,
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please
don’t forget to bring
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some
clothes suitable for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
summer
since the
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summers
in my country are
really
hot unlike the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
summer
weather in your country.
Also
, bring your prescription if you want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
any medicine from here.

Take care. Can't wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you.

Warm wishes,

Adam Spencer
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter You have invited a friend to come to your house next holiday. He/she has asked you how to get to your house from the airport. However, you are going to the airport to receive him/her. v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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