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You have invited a friend to come to your house next holiday. He/she has asked you how to get to your house from the airport. However, you are going to the airport to receive him/her. v.1

You have invited a friend to come to your house next holiday. He/she has asked you how to get to your house from the airport. However, you are going to the airport to receive him/her. v. 1
Dear Annie, I hope you are doing fine. I am excited to have you with me in a few days. Yesterday, I received your letter in which you have asked for the direction to my house from the airport. Please do not worry about that; I will come to the airport to pick you up. I am eagerly waiting to have you at my house and spend some excellent time together. I am really looking forward to meeting you and I have planned a few things for us. We can go to Mysore for a day trip. Mysore has a beautiful palace and a Zoo; which is a house of some exotic animals. Then I have also planned a 3 days' trip to Ooty. Ooty is known as "Queens of Hills" and has pristine tea gardens and mesmerising views. I am sure you will love it. Since Ooty is a cold and hilly place, please get some winter clothing and comfortable shoes. One thick jacket and a sweater would be good. Besides, you should bring any medicine you take as you won't be able to purchase any medicine without a prescription. Looking forward to meeting you soon. With love, Preeti
Dear Annie,

I hope you are doing fine. I
am excited
to have you with me in a few days. Yesterday, I received your letter in which you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
asked for
the direction to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
from the airport.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
do not worry about that; I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to the airport to pick you up. I am
eagerly
waiting to have you at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and spend
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some
excellent time together.

I am
really
looking forward to meeting you and I have planned a few things for us. We can go to Mysore for a day trip. Mysore has a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
palace and a Zoo; which is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
exotic animals. Then I have
also
planned a 3 days' trip to
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Ooty
.
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Ooty
is known
as
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"
Queens of Hills
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"
and has pristine tea gardens and
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mesmerising
views. I am sure you will
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love
it.

Since
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Ooty
is a
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cold
and hilly place,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
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get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
winter clothing and comfortable shoes. One thick jacket and a sweater would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.
Besides
, you should bring any medicine you take as you won't be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
any medicine without a prescription.

Looking forward to meeting you
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soon
.

With
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love
,

Preeti
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
A foreign language is like a frail, delicate muscle. If you do not use it, it weakens.
Jhumpa Lahiri

IELTS letter You have invited a friend to come to your house next holiday. He/she has asked you how to get to your house from the airport. However, you are going to the airport to receive him/her. v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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