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Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Dear Sir, My name is Srujan. I am wrtiting this letter to express my interest in computer course that you are offering. I recently came to know it from a local newspaper. I have a huge interest in computers, however due to some unavoidable circumstances I haven't completed elementary course. But I know very well to work in Microsoft Office and also basic creation of website. I have learnt this on my own interest and did some offshore work on these modules. I understand the completion of elementary course is mandatory to join in your computer course but I would be grateful if you can give me some exception by considering my experience and interest. If you want to evaluate my skills, I will be so happy to take part in your assessment. I am looking forward to hear a favourable reply from your end. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Srujan

Dear Sir,

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course
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end
. Thank you.

Yours faithfully
,

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Srujan