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Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Dear Sir, My name is Srujan. I am wrtiting this letter to express my interest in computer course that you are offering. I recently came to know it from a local newspaper. I have a huge interest in computers, however due to some unavoidable circumstances I haven't completed elementary course. But I know very well to work in Microsoft Office and also basic creation of website. I have learnt this on my own interest and did some offshore work on these modules. I understand the completion of elementary course is mandatory to join in your computer course but I would be grateful if you can give me some exception by considering my experience and interest. If you want to evaluate my skills, I will be so happy to take part in your assessment. I am looking forward to hear a favourable reply from your end. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Srujan
Dear Sir,

My name is
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Srujan
. I am
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wrtiting
this letter to express my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interest
in computer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
that you are offering. I recently came to know it from a local newspaper.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have a huge
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interest
in computers,
however
due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
unavoidable circumstances I haven't completed elementary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I know
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very
well to work in Microsoft Office and
also
basic creation of website. I have
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learnt
this on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interest
and did
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some
offshore work on these modules. I understand the completion of elementary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
is mandatory to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
in your computer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I would be grateful if you can give me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
exception by considering my experience and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interest
. If you want to evaluate my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, I will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
happy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in your assessment. I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure ‘look + forward + to + verb’, the verb ‘to’ is used with the gerund: “to hearing”.
to hear
a
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favourable
reply from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
. Thank you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Srujan

IELTS letter Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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  American English
5 paragraphs
149 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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