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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it 7Mpy
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to discover and inquire about new shopping complex planning to build near my home. Lately, our locality councilor informed all the members about the plan. Our locality is in outskirts and natives found difficult to access the city market as it is at long distance. Hearing such a news was a great relief for all of us. In our council meetings, we even discussed the issue of people. At the end, the president decided to request a local ministry to come up with some solutions. After a week, the developers decided to invest in our area by developing all facilities shopping center and community members are thrilled by the working of the council. Since the civil engineer and architecture team arrived yesterday for sight-seeing, I am excited to know about the kind of shops which will be available to citizens in this complex. Further, I want to inquire if there will be a lift facility for old people. I would request to add the gym so that adults do not have to travel to the city for this. I really appreciated the work of the council. I am really grateful for this and waiting for your reply about the information regarding the mall. Sincerely, Simran
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to discover and inquire about new shopping complex planning to build near my home. Lately, our locality councilor informed all the members about the plan. Our locality is in outskirts and natives found difficult to access the city market as it is at long distance.

Hearing such
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "news".
a news
was a great relief for all of us. In our council meetings, we even discussed the issue of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
, the president decided to request a local ministry to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
up with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
solutions. After a week, the developers decided to invest in our area by developing all facilities shopping center and community members
are thrilled
by the working of the council.

Since the civil engineer and architecture team arrived yesterday for sight-seeing, I
am excited
to know about the kind of shops which will be available to citizens in this complex.
Further
, I want to inquire if there will be a lift facility for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. I would request to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
the gym
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so
that adults do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
travel to the city for this.

I
really
appreciated the work of the council.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
really
grateful for this and waiting for your reply about the information regarding the mall.

Sincerely
,

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Simran
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IELTS letter You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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7 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
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