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You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for staying with them Tell them what you enjoyed most about the holiday Explain you are sending photos or the holiday with the letter

You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for staying with them Tell them what you enjoyed most about the holiday Explain you are sending photos or the holiday with the letter 6rkG
Dear ABC, I hope all of you guys are doing well. I can’t thank enough for your hospitality during my stay at your home. It was a wonderful time I had with you guys and appreciate for the things you guys have done to entertain me and made my whole trip awesome. It was altogether good experience for me and most importantly I can’t forget the evening street food market which we visited often. Being a foodie, I enjoyed most of the street food always had extra space in the stomach for another round. The weekend food festival was the unforgettable moment for me, as we had lot of local cuisine available to make our bellies fall to ground, and remember it was a surprise visit that wasn’t in our plan at all. Anyways, I can’t wait to come and visit you guys in the next holidays but to keep the excitement on I have some pictures which we have taken while we were outing. I am sending some of them to you guys through post also a surprise gift for you guys. See you in the next summer, till then have happy time. YoursXYZ
Dear ABC,

I hope all of you
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guys
are doing well. I can’t thank
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enough
for your hospitality during my stay at your home. It was a wonderful time I had with you
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guys
and appreciate for the things you
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guys
have done to entertain me and made my whole trip awesome.

It was altogether
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good
experience for me and most
importantly
I can’t forget the evening street food market which we visited
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often
. Being a foodie, I enjoyed most of the street food always had extra space in the stomach for another round. The weekend food festival was the unforgettable moment for me, as we had
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lot of
local cuisine available to
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make
our bellies fall to ground, and remember it was a surprise visit that wasn’t in our plan at all.

Anyways, I can’t wait to
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come
and visit you
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guys
in the
next
holidays
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to
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the excitement on I have
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some
pictures which we have taken while we were outing. I am sending
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some
of them to you
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guys
through post
also
a surprise gift for you guys.

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See
you in the
next
summer, till then have happy time.

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YoursXYZ
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IELTS letter You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for staying with them Tell them what you enjoyed most about the holiday Explain you are sending photos or the holiday with the letter

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194 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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