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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. 2oPA
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to inform you that I forgot a few key documents at your hotel. I am absolutely sure that I left the documents at the conference hall on the first floor. I attended the IBM annual conference meeting on the 4th of May. We had a discussion with our financial auditors at the conference hall on the first floor. I had presented a detailed financial data to our company auditors. However, I forgot to take the papers when I left. The documents are so important because they contain all the information about my company’s assets and liabilities. I am solely responsible for this data and any misuse, theft or loss of data would amount to the breach of trust the company has in me. Could you search for my documents in the conference hall? I am sure you will find them very easily. I would appreciate it if you could give me a call as soon as you find the documents. I will come and collect the documents at a time convenient to you. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, XYZ
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I forgot a few key
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documents
at your hotel. I am
absolutely
sure that I
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left
the
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documents
at the
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conference
hall on the
first
floor.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
attended the IBM annual
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conference
meeting on the 4th of May. We had a discussion with our financial auditors at the
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conference
hall on the
first
floor. I had presented a detailed financial data to our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
auditors.
However
, I forgot to take the papers when I
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left
. The
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documents
are
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so
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important
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because
they contain all the information about my
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company
’s assets and liabilities. I am
solely
responsible for this data and any misuse, theft or loss of data would amount to the breach of trust the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
has in me.

Could you search for my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
conference
hall? I am sure you will find them
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very
easily
. I would appreciate it if you could give me a call as
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soon
as you find the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will
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come
and collect the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
at a time convenient to you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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