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You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain - • why you are selling the television • describe the television • suggest a date when your friend can come and see it Write at least 150 words.

You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain - • why you are selling the television • describe the television • suggest a date when your friend can come and see it aG67
Dear John, I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to tell you that I am going to sell my Panasonic television and I think you would love to buy this gadget for your new house. As we had conversation on phone that my children are keen to purchase a new Samsung’s LED television. They are enthusiastic to have substantial sized television. Moreover, there is no enough room for keeping two same appliances. So I am thinking to sell the previous television. We acquired the existing television set around three years ago. It is a high definition Panasonic set with excellent sound and visual quality. It is very convenient to attach the phone with the play station application. However, If you are interested, you can come to my residence on 4th of next month and have a look of it. I am looking forward to hear from your side Best wishes Sukhvir Kaur
Dear John,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to
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tell
you that I am going to sell my Panasonic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
and I
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think
you would
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love
to
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buy
this gadget for your new
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house
.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
we had conversation on phone that my children are keen to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
a new Samsung’s LED
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
. They are enthusiastic to have substantial sized
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
.
Moreover
, there is no
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
room for keeping two same appliances.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I am thinking to sell the previous television.

We acquired the existing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
set around three years ago. It is a high definition Panasonic set with excellent sound and visual quality. It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
convenient to attach the phone with the play station application.

However
, If you
are interested
, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to my residence on 4th of
next
month and have a look of it.

I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from your side

Best wishes

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Sukhvir
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Kaur

IELTS letter You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain - • why you are selling the television • describe the television • suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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