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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. v. 1

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. v. 1 BJM86

Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to let you know that garbage collection system is not working properly in my area. We are facing a lots of problems and my neighbors also. Let me explain my situation with in detail. Actually, we are live in east side of the city. This place is awesome and more crowded area. Every Thursday, we put bins outside our homes on time but people are not come on time and sometime they skip their trash in our town. In this way, all time garbage bins are full and trashes came outside. Dogs are eating foods in the bins and smell come inside our home. Living conditions and healthy lifestyle are totally disturbed. Home files and insects come on that rubbish and causes infections. In town, we are tolerating a lot. Garbage management system can improve their collection system then we can enjoy healthy life. please give more concentration and solve our problem. I hope you take good action. We are waiting your reply for this condition. Thank you, Yours sincerely, 123.

Dear Sir,

I am writing a letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that garbage collection system is not working properly
 in my area. We are facing Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a lot" or simply "lots"?a lotlots
a lots
 of problems and my neighbors also
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my situation with in detail. Actually, we are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in east side of the city. This place is awesome and more crowded area. Every Thursday, we put bins outside our homes on time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 on time and sometime they skip their trash in our town. In this way, all time garbage bins are full and trashes came outside. Dogs are eating foods in the bins and smell This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 inside our home.

Living conditions and healthy lifestyle are totally
 disturbed. Home files and insects This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 on that rubbish and causes infections. In town, we are tolerating a lot. Garbage management system can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 their collection system then we can enjoy healthy life. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPlease
please
 give more concentration and solve our problem. I hope you take This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 action.

We are waiting your reply for this condition.

Thank you,

Yours sincerely
, 123. 

IELTS letter The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. v. 1

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

178 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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