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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. v. 1

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. v. 1 BJM86
Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to let you know that garbage collection system is not working properly in my area. We are facing a lots of problems and my neighbors also. Let me explain my situation with in detail. Actually, we are live in east side of the city. This place is awesome and more crowded area. Every Thursday, we put bins outside our homes on time but people are not come on time and sometime they skip their trash in our town. In this way, all time garbage bins are full and trashes came outside. Dogs are eating foods in the bins and smell come inside our home. Living conditions and healthy lifestyle are totally disturbed. Home files and insects come on that rubbish and causes infections. In town, we are tolerating a lot. Garbage management system can improve their collection system then we can enjoy healthy life. please give more concentration and solve our problem. I hope you take good action. We are waiting your reply for this condition. Thank you, Yours sincerely, 123.
Dear Sir,

I am writing a letter to
let
you know that garbage collection system is not working
properly
in my area. We are facing
a lots
of problems and my neighbors
also
.

Let
me
explain
my situation with in detail. Actually, we are
live
in east side of the city. This place is awesome and more crowded area. Every Thursday, we put bins outside our homes on time
but
people
are not
come
on time and sometime they skip their trash in our town. In this way, all time garbage bins are full and trashes came outside. Dogs are eating foods in the bins and smell
come
inside our home.

Living conditions and healthy lifestyle are
totally
disturbed. Home files and insects
come
on that rubbish and causes infections. In town, we are tolerating a lot. Garbage management system can
improve
their collection system then we can enjoy healthy life.
please
give more concentration and solve our problem. I hope you take
good
action.

We are waiting your reply for this condition.

Thank you,

Yours
sincerely
, 123.
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IELTS letter The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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