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You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend’s belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited.

You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend’s belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited. VrWQJ
Dear Anna, How are you? I keep my finger crossed for you. I 've been busy with my schedule. It cost an arm and a leg. But I always keep our memories together in my mind. The previous summer was really exciting. I was cleaning my closet and found a plethora of your books and clothes. I've been doing very well. I passed my final exam with high score that made my parents proud. Moreover, I gained numerous experience from working as a volunteer. I am now more confident and have a sense of responsibility than previous. I also made new friends during this work. Hopefully you aren't mad owing to the fact that you forgot your belongings at my home. However, if you would like me to return these to you, please let me know what would be best for you. It would be great if we could arrange a number of time and meet each other in the near future. I miss you more than I can say. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, Vera
Dear Anna, How are you? I
keep
my finger crossed for you. I 've been busy with my schedule. It cost an arm and a leg.
But
I always
keep
our memories together in my mind. The previous summer was
really
exciting. I was cleaning my closet and found a plethora of your books and clothes.

I've been doing
very
well.
I
passed my final exam with high score that made my parents proud.
Moreover
, I gained numerous experience from working as a volunteer. I am
now
more confident and have a sense of responsibility than previous. I
also
made new friends during this work.

Hopefully
you aren't mad owing to the fact that you forgot your belongings at my home.
However
, if you would like me to return these to you,
please
let
me know what would be best for you. It would be great if we could arrange a number of time and
meet
each other in the near future. I miss you more than I can say.

Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

All the best,

Vera
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IELTS letter You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend’s belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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