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You have had your computer repaired by your local computer supplier. You were extremely impressed with the service. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. Describe what happened when you call the shop. Praised the staff who helped you and ask the manager to thank those concerned.

You have had your computer repaired by your local computer supplier. You were extremely impressed with the service. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. Describe what happened when you call the shop. Praised the staff who helped you and ask the manager to thank those concerned. Nr3md
Dear Sir/Madam, I am one of your recent customers and am writing this letter to thank one of the staff members that helped me when my MacBook was acting weird and lagging all the time. Upon calling your company, Spongebob received the call and suggested that I need to ship my laptop for further maintenance. He then told me all the steps that I need to do, stayed with me on the call until I posted my laptop at the post office, and even recommended me the perfect shipping method. I just got my laptop back yesterday and Spongebob literally contacted me again to make sure that it works fine. Although I did fill the survey, I thought that I give you extra heads up on how good Spongebob’s work in the customer service. It would be really great if you can thank him personally for me and I would like to thank you for your time. Best Regards, Patrick Star
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am one of your recent customers and
Did you mean "am I"?
am
writing this letter to thank one of the staff members that
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helped
me when my MacBook was acting weird and lagging all the time.

Upon calling your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
,
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Spongebob
received the call and suggested that I need to ship my laptop for
further
maintenance. He then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me all the steps that I need to do, stayed with me on the call until I posted my laptop at the post office, and even recommended me the perfect shipping method.

I
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just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
my laptop back yesterday and
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Spongebob
literally
contacted me again to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that it works fine. Although I did fill the survey, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that I give you extra heads up on how
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
Possible spelling mistake found.
Spongebob
’s work in the customer service.

It would be
really
great if you can thank him
personally
for me and I would like to thank you for your time.

Best Regards,

Patrick Star
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IELTS letter You have had your computer repaired by your local computer supplier. You were extremely impressed with the service. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. Describe what happened when you call the shop. Praised the staff who helped you and ask the manager to thank those concerned.

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