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An organization has given an advertisement for a part-time job for local children. Write a letter to the administrator of the organization. In your letter Introduce yourself Why you think you are suitable for the job State when you will be able to join that job

An organization has given an advertisement for a part-time job for local children. Write a letter to the administrator of the organization. In your letter Introduce yourself Why you think you are suitable for the job State when you will be able to join that job bY3bX

Dear Sir I am writing this letter to request assistance from your prominent agency in securing a part-time volunteer job for local children. I am a recent university graduate with a Bachelor of Education and specification in early childcare. As, I am taking an undergraduate study, I am looking for part-time work to gain experience and apply theoretical cognition. I also have practical skills which I gained through a ten week internship at a Montessori school during my undergraduate degree. Here, I have worked with children aged between 3 years to 7 years, and in addition, I learnt how to apply the principles of individuals learning in a communal environment. I would appreciate it if you would consider my skills and experience in placing me in a suitable local area for voluntary work. I am available for immediate start and am prepared to work three days per week, moreover I am contactable on 4475578. I also attached my curriculum vitae which detail my qualifications and experience. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours sincerely Kiranprit Kaur

Dear Sir

I am writing this letter to request assistance from your prominent agency in securing a part-time volunteer job for local children. I am a recent university graduate with a Bachelor of Education and specification in early childcare.

As, I am taking an undergraduate study, I am looking for part-time work to gain experience and apply theoretical cognition. I also
 have practical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 which I gained through a When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "ten-week"ten-week
ten week
 internship at a Montessori school during my undergraduate degree. Here, I have worked with children aged between 3 years to 7 years, and in addition
, I Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 how to apply the principles of individuals learning in a communal environment.

I would appreciate it if you would consider my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and experience in placing me in a suitable local area for voluntary work. I am available for immediate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 and am prepared
 to work three days per week, moreover
 I am contactable on 4475578. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
 attached my curriculum vitae which detail my qualifications and experience.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to receiving your response.

Yours sincerely


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