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Writing a letter to building manager regarding a problem parking your bicycle problem and solution of this issue

Writing a letter to building manager regarding a problem parking your bicycle problem and solution of this issue YLkB5

I am writing to let me know that I unhappy with the parking system in our building. I have been living in this apartment for 8 years. A cycling is my daily exercise so last morning I went for parking my bicycle in the parking area than I saw there were no space. Let me explain my situation. The trouble started yesterday in the morning. I shocked in the parking place. Exactly it is third time mistake by someone. Add on to this, the bicycle is parked in the wrong side. So I complained to him three times, but I think he does not follow the parking regulation. I suggest you the parking area and system, both are unsatisfied to all flat’s members. So we can apply the penalty charge and if it is possible to build a new parking area of only the bicycle. Hence we can solve this issue at our destination.

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let
 me know that I unhappy with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 system in our building. I have been living in this apartment for 8 years. A cycling is my daily exercise This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 last morning I went for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 my bicycle in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 area than I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 there were no space.

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Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my situation. The trouble This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 yesterday in the morning. I shocked in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 place. Exactly it is third time mistake by someone. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
Add
 on to this, the bicycle is parked
 in the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
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So
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but
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 he does not follow the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 regulation.

I suggest you the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 area and system, both are unsatisfied
 to all flat’s members. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 we can apply the penalty charge and if it is possible to build a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 area of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the bicycle. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 we can solve this issue at our destination. 