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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to give feedback on the recent company meeting held at your hotel on 5th September 2019 and provide some suggestions for improvement. Firstly, most of the people were happy with the service provided in the hotel. The best part about the hotel was the decent decoration and relaxed ambiance. Moreover, the seating arrangement was also very comfortable. Additionally, the hotel location is very convenient as it is easily accessible by public transport. However, one thing that most people complained about was the quality of the food served. The choice was very limited, especially for people with special dietary requirements such as vegetarians. Also, some dishes were undercooked while others were not delicious. Finally, I would suggest some enhancements in the food. The food should be properly cooked and more items can be added to the list. Furthermore, please ensure stringent quality control and hire better chefs. Yours faithfully Muhammad Ahmad Saeed
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to give feedback on the recent
company
meeting held at your
hotel
on 5th September 2019 and provide
some
suggestions for improvement.

Firstly
, most of the
people
were happy with the service provided in the
hotel
. The best part about the
hotel
was the decent decoration and relaxed ambiance.
Moreover
, the seating arrangement was
also
very
comfortable.
Additionally
, the
hotel
location is
very
convenient as it is
easily
accessible by public transport.

However
, one thing that most
people
complained about was the quality of the food served. The choice was
very
limited,
especially
for
people
with special dietary requirements such as vegetarians.
Also
,
some
dishes were
undercooked
while others were not delicious.

Finally
, I would suggest
some
enhancements in the food. The food should be
properly
cooked and more items can be
added
to the list.
Furthermore
,
please
ensure stringent quality control and hire better chefs.

Yours
faithfully


Muhammad Ahmad
Saeed
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