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You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say – When and where did it take place? – What is your complaint? – Suggest a reasonable solution.

You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say – When and where did it take place? – What is your complaint? – Suggest a reasonable solution. e5weW
Dear Sir, My name is Robert Smith, I am writing this letter regarding the damaged made to my household chores by your company, Moving Limited while shifting my stuff to the new house. As per discussion with your branch office all the stuff should be moved to a new place on 5th of March from Bayview to North York. Although, I had been receiving my items on time at my new location. But when I was unwrapping cartons then I found out there is a massive dent on my front door of the refrigerator was bought by me just two months ago. This is not ending here, I was so furious when I saw that my newly gifted Television screen had cracked too. At the time of order place your branch manager assured me that all my luggage will be safe and not happen any kind of damage. I would like to have a full inquiry about how this damage happened along with I need my compensate for all those items. The possible reason for this kind of damage are lack of supervising the cartons when they are packed to ensure the safety. Carelessness of the labours that could break while loading or unloading from tjhe truck. I would like to suggest that hope you hire a new quality assurance staff who will take care of this. I am sure you'll look into my suggestion will take action on that. Waiting for your prompt response. Your Sincerely, Robert Smith
Dear Sir,

My name is Robert Smith, I am writing this letter regarding the damaged made to my household chores by your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, Moving Limited while shifting my stuff to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
per discussion with your branch office all the stuff should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
place on 5th of March from Bayview to North York.

“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, I had been receiving my items on time at my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
location.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
when I was unwrapping cartons then I found out there is a massive dent on my front door of the refrigerator was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
by me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
two months ago. This is not ending here, I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
furious when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
that my
newly
gifted Television screen had cracked too. At the time of order place your branch manager assured me that all my luggage will be safe and not happen any kind of damage.

I would like to have a full inquiry about how this damage happened along with I need my
The word 'compensate' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "compensation"?
compensate
for all those items. The possible reason for this kind of damage are lack of supervising the cartons when they
are packed
to ensure the safety. Carelessness of the
Possible spelling mistake. 'labours' is British English.
labours
that could break while loading or unloading from
Possible spelling mistake found.
tjhe
truck. I would like to suggest that hope you hire a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
quality assurance staff who will take care of this.

I am sure you'll look into my suggestion will take action on that. Waiting for your prompt response.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
Sincerely
,

Robert Smith
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IELTS letter You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say – When and where did it take place? – What is your complaint? – Suggest a reasonable solution.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
248 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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