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You have had your car repaired recently but now it is not working.

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Dear Sir I am one of your consumer who had her car repaired. I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with my mended car. In that day I went to the auto repaired company in order to have my car repaired. Since you have suggested as the best mechanic at that company. I decided that my car would be in a good condition after your repairing. After that I came back to my home with good condition of car. On the contrary after 3 or 4 days it started to show its bad side. What was I supposed to do. Did I need to pay extra money for repairing again. Of course, I am not. I believe you can appreciate how I was disappointed when this happened. I would like a full or part of my money refunded. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. Your faithfully, Your costumer Lucy!

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car
 repaired. I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with my mended You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. In that day I went to the auto repaired This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 in order to have my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 repaired. Since you have suggested as the best mechanic at that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I decided that my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 would be in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 condition after your repairing. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that I came back to my home with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 condition of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. On the contrary
 after 3 or 4 days it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 side. What was I supposed to do. Did I need to pay extra money for repairing again. Of course
, I am not. I believe you can appreciate how I was disappointed
 when this happened. I would like a full or part of my money refunded. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 look forward to receiving a prompt reply. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
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faithfully
, Your costumer Lucy! 