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You have had your car repaired recently but now it is not working.

You have had your car repaired recently but now it is not working. dDNqX
Dear Sir I am one of your consumer who had her car repaired. I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with my mended car. In that day I went to the auto repaired company in order to have my car repaired. Since you have suggested as the best mechanic at that company. I decided that my car would be in a good condition after your repairing. After that I came back to my home with good condition of car. On the contrary after 3 or 4 days it started to show its bad side. What was I supposed to do. Did I need to pay extra money for repairing again. Of course, I am not. I believe you can appreciate how I was disappointed when this happened. I would like a full or part of my money refunded. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. Your faithfully, Your costumer Lucy!
Dear Sir I am one of your consumer who had her
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
repaired. I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with my mended
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
. In that day I went to the auto repaired
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company
in order to have my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
repaired. Since you have suggested as the best mechanic at that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. I decided that my
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car
would be in a
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good
condition after your repairing.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
that I came back to my home with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
condition of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
.
On the contrary
after 3 or 4 days it
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started
to
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show
its
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bad
side. What was I supposed to do. Did I need to pay extra money for repairing again.
Of course
, I am not. I believe you can appreciate how I
was disappointed
when this happened. I would like a full or part of my money refunded.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to receiving a prompt reply.
Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
, Your costumer Lucy!

IELTS letter You have had your car repaired recently but now it is not working.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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