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Motivation letter for stipendium hungaricum scholarship by tempus foundation

Motivation letter for stipendium hungaricum scholarship by tempus foundation V0AJQ
Hey, I am Ubaidullah from Pakistan and I have done my Fsc pre engineering from Punjab college in Pakistan. I am writing this letter to request you to consider me for a stipendium hungaricum scholarship. I have enclosed the completed application and additional materials required by the tempus foundation. I selected the University of Debrecen for mechatronics engineering. Mechatronics or especially robotics (automation) is something I find fascinating as it is a new program and have utmost importance in near future. Mechatronics degree programs focus on combining various engineering fields, including electrical, computer, mechanical, control, and telecommunications, with robotics and cybersecurity. It’s a degree that opens up a lot of doors in so many fields. You can work in automation, factories that make equipment or work as a vehicle or Aircraft designer. I think in future, there will be more of a push toward automation. Automation is going to keep growing until it is a part of every field which will come up with need of mechatronics engineers. For practicing mechatronics, comes up with a need of state-of-the-art laboratories. Which kind of amaze me to lay my hands on High-Tec machines. Also, If we utilize the knowledge correctly we can help the humans such as surgical robots on which many companies are still working, Surgical robots will perform complex operation like Removal of cancerous tumors, biopsies, gastric bypasses and repairing of heart valves with more precision and control. Unfortunately while other developed countries bringing innovation towards automation, Pakistan is still lacking in technology. After Bachelor, I will try to use what I have learned from Hungary for the benefit of my country. My father is a retired government officer. My father pension is round about 500$ and also here in Pakistan mechatronics is still a new thing and hardly 2 or 3 universities are offering mechatronics program, so I, ve been looking for scholarship for a long time and specially in hungary then I came across this program -Stipendium Hungaricum by tempus foundation. It was quite convenient to use, with a wide range of universities, which for the program offered a scholarship for. Since the financial situation of my family does not allow me to pay the full tuition fee and to cover all my daily expenses in Hungary, this program "opened all the locked doors" towards education in Hungary for me. I understand that the program may not cover all the expenses and I consider myself as a person who can cover the other part of my expenses in Hungary as I, ve read your policies about working after study hours and I will be more than happy to do the job there as I, ve already done 2 or 3 jobs here so it will not be that hard for me. Now the question raises why specifically I choose hungary and university of debrecen to complete my studies. As hungary is in the heart of Europe and Pakistan have good relation with hungary and also not to mention some of the oldest universities of the world in hungary. Also the witcher movie is also filmed there which I, ve recently watched. I will be grateful if I can become an awardee of Stipendium Hungaricum because it is a big help for me to achieve my goal in the future. Thank you for the consideration. Sincerely Ubaidullah
Hey,

I am
Ubaidullah
from Pakistan and I have done my
Fsc
pre
engineering from Punjab college in Pakistan. I am writing this letter to request you to consider me for a
stipendium
hungaricum
scholarship.
I
have enclosed the completed application and additional materials required by the
tempus
foundation.

I
selected the
University
of
Debrecen
for mechatronics engineering. Mechatronics or
especially
robotics
(automation)
is something I find fascinating as it is a new
program
and have utmost importance in near future. Mechatronics degree
programs
focus on combining various engineering fields, including electrical, computer, mechanical, control, and telecommunications, with robotics and cybersecurity. It’s a degree that opens up
a lot of
doors in
so
many
fields. You can work in
automation
, factories that
make
equipment or work as a vehicle or Aircraft designer. I
think
in future
, there will be more of a push toward
automation
.
Automation
is going to
keep
growing until it is a part of every field which will
come
up with need of mechatronics engineers. For practicing mechatronics,
comes
up with a need of state-of-the-art laboratories.
Which
kind of amaze me to lay my hands on
High-Tec
machines.
Also
, If we utilize the knowledge
correctly
we can
help
the humans such as surgical robots on which
many
companies
are
still
working, Surgical robots will perform complex operation like Removal of cancerous tumors, biopsies, gastric bypasses and repairing of heart valves with more precision and control. Unfortunately while other
developed countries
bringing innovation towards
automation
, Pakistan is
still
lacking in technology. After Bachelor, I will try to
use
what I have learned from Hungary for the benefit of my country.

My father is a retired
government
officer. My father pension is round about
500$
and
also
here in Pakistan mechatronics is
still
a new thing and hardly 2 or 3
universities
are offering mechatronics
program
,
so
I, ve been looking for scholarship for a long time and
specially
in
hungary
then I came across this
program
-Stipendium
Hungaricum
by
tempus
foundation. It was quite convenient to
use
, with a wide range of
universities
, which for the
program
offered a scholarship for. Since the financial situation of my family does not
allow
me to pay the full tuition fee and to cover all my daily expenses in Hungary, this
program
"
opened all the locked doors
"
towards education in Hungary for me. I understand that the
program
may not cover all the expenses and I consider myself as a person who can cover the other part of my expenses in Hungary as I, ve read your policies about working after study hours and I will be more than happy to do the job there as I, ve already done 2 or 3 jobs here
so
it will not be that
hard
for me.

Now
the question raises why
specifically
I choose
hungary
and
university
of
debrecen
to complete my studies. As
hungary
is in the heart of Europe and Pakistan have
good
relation with
hungary
and
also
not to mention
some
of the oldest
universities
of the world in
hungary
.
Also
the
witcher
movie is
also
filmed there which I, ve recently
watched
.

I will be grateful if I can become an awardee of
Stipendium
Hungaricum
because
it is a
big
help
for me to achieve my goal in the future.

Thank you for the consideration.

Sincerely


Ubaidullah
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IELTS letter Motivation letter for stipendium hungaricum scholarship by tempus foundation

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