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You borrowed a book from your classmate.However, you had failed to return the book they left for the hometown

You borrowed a book from your classmate. However, you had failed to return the book they left for the hometown XoAAP

Dear Jack, Hope you are doing well. I heard that you returned back to your hometown last week. I remembered that the chemistry book which I borrowed from you for last term examination is still with me. I am really sorry for not returning the book on time. I know that how important this book is for you because it will give you a great help in your next class. This book have given me a huge benefits for my examination. Moreover, I also remember one day you have told me that the topics in this book are very important for your entrance examination for Msc. Chemistry, but due to my poor memory, I was unable to give you back this book before you left for your home. I hope you'll not mind for my forgetfulness. If you urgenty need this book, I'll send you through speed courier. Otherwise, I'll send you required money so that you can buy the new one from your own hometown. Please do keep in touch and let me know how can I help you. Best wishes, Mandy

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returned back
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book
 which I borrowed from you for last term examination is still
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book
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because
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help
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very
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Msc
. Chemistry, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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book
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before
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left
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book
, I'll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 you through speed courier. Otherwise
, I'll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 you required money This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the new one from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 hometown. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in touch and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know how can I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you. Best wishes, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphMandy.Mandy!Mandy?Mandy:Mandy,Mandy;
Mandy