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You borrowed a book from your classmate.However, you had failed to return the book they left for the hometown

You borrowed a book from your classmate. However, you had failed to return the book they left for the hometown XoAAP
Dear Jack, Hope you are doing well. I heard that you returned back to your hometown last week. I remembered that the chemistry book which I borrowed from you for last term examination is still with me. I am really sorry for not returning the book on time. I know that how important this book is for you because it will give you a great help in your next class. This book have given me a huge benefits for my examination. Moreover, I also remember one day you have told me that the topics in this book are very important for your entrance examination for Msc. Chemistry, but due to my poor memory, I was unable to give you back this book before you left for your home. I hope you'll not mind for my forgetfulness. If you urgenty need this book, I'll send you through speed courier. Otherwise, I'll send you required money so that you can buy the new one from your own hometown. Please do keep in touch and let me know how can I help you. Best wishes, Mandy
Dear Jack, Hope you are doing well. I heard that you
Consider using "returned".
returned back
to your hometown last week. I remembered that the chemistry
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
which I borrowed from you for last term examination is
still
with me.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
really
sorry for not returning the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
on time.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
know that how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
is for you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it will give you a great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in your
next
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
me a huge
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "benefit"?
benefits
for my examination.
Moreover
, I
also
remember one day you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that the topics in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for your entrance examination for
Possible spelling mistake found.
Msc
. Chemistry,
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but
due to my poor memory, I was unable to give you back this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
for your home. I hope you'll not mind for my forgetfulness. If you
Possible spelling mistake found.
urgenty
need this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
, I'll
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
you through speed courier.
Otherwise
, I'll
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
you required money
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
the new one from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
hometown.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
in touch and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know how can I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you. Best wishes,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Mandy

IELTS letter You borrowed a book from your classmate. However, you had failed to return the book they left for the hometown

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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