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One of your friends had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you could not attend

One of your friends had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you could not attend 7p6VY
Dear Friend Soubhag, I heard from Vineet that your birthday bash was magnificent! The older the wiser, right? Wish you a belated happy birthday Soubhag, I neglected to tell you I couldn't make it to the celebration. Please accept my sincerest apologies for missing the most sought-after event of the year. We had planned ahead and invested plenty of thought into it. I am feeling terribly sorry for skipping the party and not being able to give you a heads up about it. To tell you the truth, there was a production issue that started from noon and the root cause analysis went till midnight, everyone was on their toes in my team! And add to that, the issue seemed to be originated from my module so I had to oversee the troubleshooting process and could not leave before this was rectified. It was the next morning when everything settled down and systems were trending green. Even with all that, I feel terrible for missing out on seeing you on your birthday. How does a first show of the movie Matrix in Cinemax followed by a Dinner at Four Seasons sound? my treat! This can be worked around your schedule, anytime this month. Wish you a very happy birthday and a healthy year ahead! Warm Regards, Harsh
Dear Friend
Soubhag
,

I heard from
Vineet
that your birthday bash was magnificent! The older the wiser, right? Wish you a belated happy birthday
Soubhag
, I neglected to
tell
you I couldn't
make
it to the celebration.

Please
accept my sincerest apologies for missing the most sought-after
event
of the year. We had planned ahead and invested
plenty
of
thought
into it. I am feeling
terribly
sorry for skipping the party and not being able to give you a heads up about it.

To
tell
you the truth, there was a production issue that
started
from noon and the root cause analysis went till midnight, everyone was on their toes in my team! And
add
to that, the issue seemed to
be originated
from my module
so
I had to oversee the troubleshooting process and could not
leave
before
this
was rectified
. It was the
next
morning when everything settled down and systems were trending green.

Even with all that, I feel terrible for missing out on seeing you on your birthday. How does a
first
show
of the movie Matrix in
Cinemax
followed by a Dinner at Four Seasons sound?
my
treat! This can
be worked
around your schedule, anytime this month.

Wish you a
very
happy birthday and a healthy year ahead!

Warm Regards,

Harsh

IELTS letter One of your friends had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you could not attend

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