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You are planning for a party for the family and want to invite your friend. Why you want to organize the party? What plans you have made? why you want him to be at the party?

You are planning for a party for the family and want to invite your friend. Why you want to organize the party? What plans you have made? why you want him to be at the party? OEAbM
Dear John, How are you? It has been seemingly endless stretch since our last letter exchange. Although with our friendship I have been out of the picture for a long time but today I am writing to invite to a party I am hosting for my family. Luckily, my family has purchased our dream house at Avon drive rather than the one we were earlier opting. On this occasion I did want to throw a huge party for my family, as you are aware since day one my family has been struggling to own a house. I have forethought that the party will be at the new house. Firstly, the front garden will be splendidly decorated to set the mood for the party. In addition to this we can play fun games like pass the parcel and dumb charades. Not only this, we will have a live band jamming the favorite songs on request of the guest as well as a spellbinding flashy dance floor. Not to miss, the food will be served in three stages, first the starters that will be of Chinese cuisine which will be followed by main course and dinner. This will comprise of three different cuisines, to name, Indian, Italian and Chinese. I am confident after knowing all this you would definitely not want to miss this party. On top of that, I feel it would be a chance for us to catch-up to the old days we had spent envisaging of a party in our own houses. Even though life has kept us busy and we have not been in touch frequently, it would be my pleasure to have you as guest in this party. I really hope you will be able to come at the party. It would not be the same without you. Write back soon. Yours
Dear John,

How are you? It has been
seemingly
endless stretch since our last letter exchange. Although with our friendship I have been out of the picture for a long time
but
today
I am writing to invite to a
party
I am hosting for my family.

Luckily, my family has
purchased
our dream
house
at Avon drive
rather
than the one we were earlier opting. On this occasion I did want to throw a huge
party
for my family, as you are aware since day one my family has been struggling to
own
a
house
. I have forethought that the
party
will be at the new
house
.
Firstly
, the front garden will be
splendidly
decorated to set the mood for the
party
.
In addition
to this we can play fun games like pass the parcel and dumb charades. Not
only
this, we will have a
live
band jamming the favorite songs on request of the guest
as well
as a spellbinding flashy dance floor. Not to miss, the food will
be served
in three stages,
first
the starters that will be of Chinese cuisine which will
be followed
by main course and dinner. This
will comprise of
three
different
cuisines, to name, Indian, Italian and Chinese.

I am confident after knowing all this you would definitely not want to miss this
party
.
On top of that
, I feel it would be a chance for us to catch-up to the
old
days we had spent envisaging of a
party
in our
own
houses
.
Even though
life has
kept
us
busy and
we have not been in touch
frequently
, it would be my pleasure to have you as guest in this party.

I
really
hope you will be able to
come
at the
party
. It would not be the same without you.

Write back
soon
.

Yours
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IELTS letter You are planning for a party for the family and want to invite your friend. Why you want to organize the party? What plans you have made? why you want him to be at the party?

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  American English
7 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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