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you have friend one of the colleges in this city who lives in acity abroad. You would like to study at colleges in this city. write a letter to your friend asking for advice

you have friend one of the colleges in this city who lives in acity abroad. You would like to study at colleges in this city. write a letter to your friend asking for advice ebmjx

Dear friend AnnI am writing to ask if you could help me with how to choose one appropriete college. As you know I am 16 years old. I am interested in chemistry. I want to be a doctor. So I would study foreign countries. Because many famous professors teach and live there. I want to learn from them. Would you mind offering me some advice about how to choose a college? I have heard about a lot of colleges but I have some difficulties to choose one of them. You have been living there for ages and you have enough information about there. Which college is correspond for me? If you send me list of colleges I will choose better one. Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. you are my best friend and I hope you will help me. i look forward to receiving your advice. Your sincerely Lola

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 better one. Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYou
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 are my best friend and I hope you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
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 me. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 look forward to receiving your advice. Your sincerely
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Lola