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Hi Trang, I want to write this email to express my gratitude with you after our English course. You were more amazing teacher than ever I met. I had a great time in your class. I’m sure that my English is improved a lots because of all your help. Thank you for all the wonderful topics, tips, documents and English sources that you gave me. Also, I really appreciate your patient, dedication during our class and this help me can speak English confidently and fluently. I hope we can meet and have a chance to work together Take care! Lam
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Trang
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I want to write this email to express my gratitude with you after our English course.

You were more amazing teacher than ever I met. I had a great time in your
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class
. I’m sure that my English is
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improved
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a lots
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because
of all your
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help
. Thank you for all the wonderful topics, tips, documents and English sources that you gave me.
Also
, I
really
appreciate your patient, dedication during our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
and this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me can speak English
confidently
and
fluently
.

I hope we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
and have a chance to work together

Take care!

Lam
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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