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Hi Trang, I want to write this email to express my gratitude with you after our English course. You were more amazing teacher than ever I met. I had a great time in your class. I’m sure that my English is improved a lots because of all your help. Thank you for all the wonderful topics, tips, documents and English sources that you gave me. Also, I really appreciate your patient, dedication during our class and this help me can speak English confidently and fluently. I hope we can meet and have a chance to work together Take care! Lam

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I want to write this email to express my gratitude with you after our English course.

You were more amazing teacher than ever I met. I had a great time in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. I’m sure that my English is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
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a lots
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of all your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. Thank you for all the wonderful topics, tips, documents and English sources that you gave me. Also
, I really
 appreciate your patient, dedication during our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 and this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me can speak English confidently
 and fluently
.

I hope we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 and have a chance to work together

Take care!

Lam

IELTS letter write a thank-you email to your old teacher

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

99 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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