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describe the following features of the hotel: room, food, indoor swimming pool, sauna area • include one feature that can be improved by the hotel management

describe the following features of the hotel: room, food, indoor swimming pool, sauna area • include one feature that can be improved by the hotel management L9O1V
Hello hotel manager, I have celebrated my holiday and enjoyed your hotel's facilities. earlier, I got opportunity to staying in various world class hotels around the world. If I compare your with another hotel then I have to say your hotel's over all management system is really better than nay other hotel. Firstly, I became amaze to see your to is for eastern and western cultural food. when I saw my sub continent food and taste was really delicious. Specially I got great collaboration from your room servicemen, last night I was suffering for headache. Specially I got great collaboration from your room servicemen, last night I was suffering for headache. I requested to them manage medicine then they were able to collate medicine at midnight. Later, when I offered them some money but they didn't take it and they told it is our responsibility. You include a massive indoor swimming pool that really incredible. I was swimming there and got refreshment and water was temperate. I was using a luxurious sauna area that really a good addition for customers. i would like to say your overall system is best but I think you need to appoint a permanent doctor to ensure costommer's Primary Health Care.
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manager, I have celebrated my holiday and enjoyed your hotel's facilities.
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earlier
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opportunity to staying in various world
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class
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hotels
around the world. If I compare your with another
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then I
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have to
say your hotel's over all management system is
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really
better than nay other
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.
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, I became amaze to
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your to is for eastern and western cultural food.
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when
I
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my sub continent food and taste was
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delicious.
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got
great collaboration from your room servicemen, last night I was suffering for headache.
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I
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got
great collaboration from your room servicemen, last night I was suffering for headache. I requested to them manage medicine then they were able to collate medicine at midnight. Later, when I offered them
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money
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incredible. I was swimming there and
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got
refreshment and water was temperate. I was using a luxurious sauna area that
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really
a
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addition for customers.
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's Primary Health Care.
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IELTS letter describe the following features of the hotel: room, food, indoor swimming pool, sauna area • include one feature that can be improved by the hotel management

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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