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Formal letter write to the manager

Formal letter write to the manager EdOd3
I am writing this letter in a connection with my recent breakfast meal in your restaurant for the celebration of my friend’s graduation from air university as a pilot. My friend is not only graduated as a pilot from the best University in the country but also selected as an air force pilot officer too. Being a friend of such an officer is the happiness you can not express in words. Friends are life, and a friend associated with country forces is something you cannot ignore. We all friends celebrated this special and memorable occasion in your restaurant. This celebration and gathering were served with splendid and delicious food and the occasion was made more exciting and delightful. The quality of the food was extremely fresh and full of aroma. Food was freshly prepared with very good ingredients. The taste was enhanced by its presentation. I m very glad that you people offer the best service in our town an affordable prices. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
I am writing this letter in a connection with my recent breakfast meal in your restaurant for the celebration of my
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friend’s
graduation from air university as a pilot.

My
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friend
is not
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only
graduated as a pilot from the best University in the country
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but
also
selected as an air force pilot officer too. Being a
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friend
of such an officer is the happiness you can not express in words.
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Friends
are life, and a
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friend
associated with country forces is something you cannot
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ignore
. We all
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friends
celebrated this special and memorable occasion in your restaurant. This celebration and gathering
were served
with splendid and delicious food and the occasion
was made
more exciting and delightful. The quality of the food was
extremely
fresh and full of aroma. Food was
freshly
prepared with
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very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
ingredients. The taste
was enhanced
by its presentation.

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I m
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very
glad that you
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people
offer the best service in our town an affordable
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prices
.

I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
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IELTS letter Formal letter write to the manager

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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