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Thesystemusedforrubbish/garbagecolectioninyourlocalareaisnotworkingpropery.Thisiscausingproblemsforyouandyourneighbours.Writealettertothelocalcouncil.Inyourletter •describehowtherubbishcolectionsystemisnotworgproperly •explainhowthisisaffectingyouandyourneighbours •suggest what should be done about the problem

Thesystemusedforrubbish/garbagecolectioninyourlocalareaisnotworkingpropery. Thisiscausingproblemsforyouandyourneighbours. Writealettertothelocalcouncil. Inyourletter •describehowtherubbishcolectionsystemisnotworgproperly •explainhowthisisaffectingyouandyourneighbours •suggest what should be done about the problem BgXap
Dear sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction towards the procedure practiced by the garbadge collection agency to collect rubbish in our locality as it is causing alot of unnecessary nusence. The quality of service provided is not upto the mark along with that the timing at which they performs their job is also unpleasent. let me explain the situation, the slots alloted to our society for garbadge collection are mondays and tusdays every week. The timing choosen by the cleaning agency is between 8: 30 am to 9: 30 am, considering these timing as the rush hours for the working class there is a problem of jams and unconvenience at the locals, as there is only a one way road for the in and out from the society. The other conern is the qualty of service provided to us, the cleaning workers do not clean the area properly after they leaves alongwith that most of the time they leaves some portion of junk behind arguing lack of space. I would be most greatful if you could change the timings to early mornings so that precious time can be saved, also if possible please grant us one extra day in a month so those heavy waste can be removed. I very hope that you will be able to help us in these matters. Your Faithfuly,
Dear sir,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction towards the procedure practiced by the
garbadge
collection agency to collect rubbish in our locality as it is causing
alot
of unnecessary
nusence
. The quality of service provided is not
upto
the mark along with that the
timing
at which they
performs
their job is
also
unpleasent
.

let
me
explain
the situation, the slots
alloted
to our society for
garbadge
collection are
mondays
and
tusdays
every week. The
timing
choosen
by the cleaning agency is between 8: 30 am to 9: 30 am, considering these
timing
as the rush hours for the working
class
there is a problem of jams and
unconvenience
at the locals, as there is
only
a one way road for the in and out from the society.

The other
conern
is the
qualty
of service provided to us, the cleaning workers do not clean the area
properly
after they
leaves
alongwith
that most of the time they
leaves
some
portion of junk behind arguing lack of space.

I would be most
greatful
if you could
change
the timings to early mornings
so
that precious time can
be saved
,
also
if possible
please
grant us one extra day in a month
so
those heavy waste can
be removed
.

I
very
hope that you will be able to
help
us in these matters.

Your
Faithfuly
,
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IELTS letter Thesystemusedforrubbish/garbagecolectioninyourlocalareaisnotworkingpropery. Thisiscausingproblemsforyouandyourneighbours. Writealettertothelocalcouncil. Inyourletter •describehowtherubbishcolectionsystemisnotworgproperly •explainhowthisisaffectingyouandyourneighbours •suggest what should be done about the problem

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