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You have found a new job. Write a letter to a friend about it. Explain why you made the change. Tell your friend something about the new job. Ask your friend to get together to celebrate

You have found a new job. Write a letter to a friend about it. Explain why you made the change. Tell your friend something about the new job. Ask your friend to get together to celebrate N8rGd

Dear John, I hope that you are in radiant health and the best of spirits. I’m writing this letter to inform you with much excitement that I have been appointed as a Senior Electrical Engineer at General Electrics. I was really aspiring to work in my core industry and fortunately, the organization had an appropriate opening for the same. Let me explain to you in detail. As you are aware of my keen interest in the power sector, General Electrics would be a good platform to showcase my technical knowledge. Also, there are numerous programs available to upskill their employees. If I could make use of these opportunities, I would probably grow faster in my career. Could you take some time this weekend to attend a small get-together planned at my home? A few of our friends would be visiting and I’m sure you will enjoy the night. Looking forward to meeting you at the party night! Your friend, Sam.

Dear John,

I hope that you are in radiant health and the best of spirits. I’m writing this letter to inform you with much excitement that I have been appointed
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 was really
 aspiring to work in my core industry and fortunately
, the organization had an appropriate opening for the same.

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Let
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explain
 to you in detail. As you are aware of my keen interest in the power sector, General Electrics would be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 platform to showcase my technical knowledge. Also
, there are numerous programs available to upskill their employees. If I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of these opportunities, I would probably
 grow faster in my career.

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some
 time this weekend to attend a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
-together planned at my home? A few of our friends would be visiting and I’m sure you will enjoy the night.

Looking forward to meeting you at the party night!

Your friend,

Sam. 