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Letter for invitation to a friend

Letter for invitation to a friend K0nrN
Dear Sheenu, It’s been long that we haven’t had a chance to talk to each other. Hope everything is good at your end. I would like to share a great new with you. You remember the art exhibition I told you about when we spoke last in the month May. My picture has finally got selected to be displayed in the gallery and received a reward. I would love to invite you to the event which will be hosted next month. From last few months, I was submitting my photographs to different art galleries arranging contests and exhibitions. One of the contests which interest me the most was around wild life photography and as you are aware I’m always been keen to visit wild life sanctuaries and clicking pictures for animals. This contest called the ‘The Wild Beauty’ is near the City Centre and around 150 entries were submitted out of which only 3 were selected. The photo which I choose to submit was of a white tiger which I took last year on my trip to Northern Australia. There is a forest near the area where I stayed and Hotel Manager told me about the animals I can see during my visit. Luckily, on the 1st day of my forest trip, I was able to see 2 white tigers and fortunate enough to get a picture for one of them before they jumped back to their sheds. Can you guess the prize I won? Well let me tell you, it is the 1st prize and I’m so excited. Hope you will be able to make it to the event. Warm regardsHarjeet
Dear
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Sheenu
,

It’s been long that we haven’t had a chance to talk to each other. Hope everything is
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good
at your
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end
. I would like to share a great new with you. You remember the art exhibition I
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told
you about when we spoke last in the month May. My picture has
finally
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got
selected to
be displayed
in the gallery and received a reward. I would
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love
to invite you to the
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event
which will
be hosted
next
month.

From last few months, I was submitting my photographs to
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different
art galleries arranging contests and exhibitions. One of the contests which interest me the most was around wild life photography and as you are aware I’m always been keen to visit wild life sanctuaries and clicking pictures for animals. This contest called the ‘The Wild Beauty’ is near the City
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Centre
and around 150 entries
were submitted
out of which
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only
3
were selected
.

The photo which I choose to submit was of a white tiger which I took last year on my trip to Northern Australia. There is a forest near the area where I stayed and Hotel Manager
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me about the animals I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
during my visit. Luckily, on the 1st day of my forest trip, I was able to
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see
2 white tigers and fortunate
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enough
to
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get
a picture for one of them
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before
they jumped back to their sheds.

Can you guess the prize I won? Well
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let
me
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tell
you, it is the 1st prize and I’m
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so
excited. Hope you will be able to
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make
it to the
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event
.

Warm
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regardsHarjeet
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IELTS letter Letter for invitation to a friend

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
271 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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