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You’ve just returned from a disastrous holiday! It was not as described by the agent and you experienced serious problems. Write a letter of complaint to the agent. In your letter • remind the agent about theholiday • explain to them whathappened • ask forcompensation

You’ve just returned from a disastrous holiday! It was not as described by the agent and you experienced serious problems. Write a letter of complaint to the agent. In your letter • remind the agent about theholiday • explain to them whathappened • ask forcompensation APjDw
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my displeasure over the journey which I had taken through your company. I had purchased a tour package of ten days from your organization to spend my vacations with my family in China; however, despite all of your acknowledgements it turned out to be the worst experience of my life. Let me describe my situation to you in detail. As my flight landed in Beijing, I expected a tour guide to be present at the airport to commute us to the hotel. On the contrary, no one came to receive us, and after a few difficulties, we were able to book a cab to the hotel. Later, the person visited to our room and instead of offering apology he displayed a rude behaviour to us. Similarly, he never arrived on the agreed time even for a single day; consequently, we were unable to enjoy our holiday. I hope you remember the agreement that in case of any miscommitment, you will refund me the trip amount. Now, in order to maintain a good customer care, I hope you will return me the amount I paid for this tour. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Jay
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my displeasure over the journey which I had taken through your
company
. I had
purchased
a tour package of ten days from your organization to spend my vacations with my family in China;
however
, despite all of your
acknowledgements
it turned out to be the worst experience of my life.

Let
me
describe
my situation to you in detail. As my flight landed in Beijing, I
expected
a tour guide to be present at the airport to commute us to the hotel.
On the contrary
, no one came to receive us, and after a few difficulties, we were able to book a cab to the hotel. Later, the person visited to our room and
instead
of offering apology he displayed a rude
behaviour
to us.
Similarly
, he never
arrived on
the
agreed
time even for a single day;
consequently
, we were unable to enjoy our holiday.

I hope you remember the agreement that in case of any
miscommitment
, you will refund me the trip amount.
Now
, in order to maintain a
good
customer care, I hope you will return me the amount I paid for this tour.

I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jay

IELTS letter You’ve just returned from a disastrous holiday! It was not as described by the agent and you experienced serious problems. Write a letter of complaint to the agent. In your letter • remind the agent about theholiday • explain to them whathappened • ask forcompensation

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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