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You see this advertisement in the online magazine Global Food: Wanted: Restaurant Reviewer We are looking for someone to write reviews of restaurants in your area. You should: • be able to take photographs to go with your reviews • be interested in different types of food • have a good level of English Write to the magazine editor, Phil Simms, explaining why you are suitable for the job Write your letter of application

You see this advertisement in the online magazine Global Food: Wanted: Restaurant Reviewer We are looking for someone to write reviews of restaurants in your area. You should: • be able to take photographs to go with your reviews • be interested in different types of food • have a good level of English Write to the magazine editor, Phil Simms, explaining why you are suitable for the job Write your letter of application rKL66
Dear Mr. Phil Simms, I would like to apply for the position of a restaurant reviewer which I saw advertised in the online magazine Global Food. I am 28 years old, and I graduated from Sai Gon university with a degree in English Linguistics and Literature. Therefore, I am confident that I am a fluent speaker of the language with a Proficiency certificate in English, so I can speak and write it as well for this job. I love trying food in restaurants. I am currently working as a freelance food writer on my blog. I have experienced in this job for over 4 years. So far, I have visited so many restaurants in my country to have a go at eating different types of cuisines, especially Italian and Vietnamese ones. I wrote a hundred reviews on food and restaurants with my own experience and received a lot of comments and responses from the readers. Also, I am keen on taking photographs. They are not so excellent as those of the photographers, but they are quite good enough to attach to my reviews. I think that I would be a suitable candidate for this job because I have enough necessary qualifications to meet your needs. This will give me the chance to show my ability of writing skill and get more experience. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require further information, I am available for an interview at any time convenient to you. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. Yours sincerely, An Thanh
Dear Mr. Phil
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I would like to apply for the position of a
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restaurant
reviewer which I
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advertised in the online magazine Global Food.

I am 28 years
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, and I graduated from
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Sai
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Gon
university with a degree in English Linguistics and Literature.
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, I am confident that I am a fluent speaker of the language with a Proficiency certificate in English,
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so
I can speak and write it
as well
for this job.

I
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love
trying food in
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restaurants
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currently
working as a freelance food writer on my blog.
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have experienced in this job for over 4 years.
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far, I have visited
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many
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restaurants
in my country to have a go at eating
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different
types of cuisines,
especially
Italian and Vietnamese ones. I wrote a hundred reviews on food and
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restaurants
with my
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own
experience and received
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a lot of
comments and responses from the readers.
Also
, I am keen on taking photographs. They are not
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so
excellent as those of the photographers,
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they are quite
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good
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enough
to attach to my reviews.

I
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because
I have
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enough
necessary qualifications to
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meet
your needs. This will give me the chance to
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show
my ability of writing
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skill
and
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get
more experience.

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Please
do not hesitate to contact me if you require
further
information, I am available for an interview at any time convenient to you.

I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Yours
sincerely
,

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IELTS letter You see this advertisement in the online magazine Global Food: Wanted: Restaurant Reviewer We are looking for someone to write reviews of restaurants in your area. You should: • be able to take photographs to go with your reviews • be interested in different types of food • have a good level of English Write to the magazine editor, Phil Simms, explaining why you are suitable for the job Write your letter of application

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9 paragraphs
260 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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