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You have recently flown to another country on a business trip .You were satisfied with flight ,but did not like at the airport.Write a letter to the airport manager.

You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight, but did not like at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager. MBM0a
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing a place of complaint against your services at the airport on Feburary 14. My flight was at 7 PM and I satisfied it due to the fact that the flight didn't delay. However, I felt quite anger with services which there was a problem depend on registration clearly, I had a difficulties with finding airport station which I spent 30 minutes though I wasn't late to flight. Moreover, logbook was not given to me as a help to find that station. I think the best way to solve this problem is that change the territory of the airport station. I would be grateful if you solve the problem with paying attention to my complaint letter and create facilities to passengers when it comes to talk about registration centre.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing a place of complaint against your services at the airport on
Possible spelling mistake found.
Feburary
14. My flight was at 7 PM and I satisfied it due to the fact that the flight didn't delay.
However
, I felt quite anger with services which there was a problem depend on registration
clearly
, I had
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a difficulty" or simply "difficulties"?
a difficulties
with finding airport station which I spent 30 minutes though I wasn't late to flight.
Moreover
, logbook was not
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given
to me as a
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help
to find that station. I
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think
the best way to solve this problem is that
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change
the territory of the airport station. I would be grateful if you solve the problem with paying attention to my complaint letter and create facilities to passengers when it
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comes
to talk about registration
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centre
.

IELTS letter You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight, but did not like at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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