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Letter on getting a reference letter

Letter on getting a reference letter 0MndB
Dear Mr Thomas, Hope you’re doing well. I’m writing this letter regarding our discussion we had a week back on my decision of moving out and joining a new company from next month onwards. Thank you for considering my resignation and finalising the release date promptly. As you are already aware, I was working as a Process Trainer with Fidelity Investments for one of the Retail Operations Team in India. My core job responsibilities were to ensure the internal training for the department is completed in a timely manner and making sure that the standard operating procedures are up-to-date to be utilised effectively for training and reference purposes. From next month, I will be joining KPMG as Training Manager and will be mainly responsible for conducting induction and orientation training for new staff members hired for any department across India. Though most of the key tasks will remain same as I had it here, however, it is an opportunity for me to learn how KPMG’s hiring process works and induction training are being conducted as with Fidelity my scope was limited to the inter-department training only. As we have worked together for 4 years, I would like to request you to write a reference letter for me which is a mandatory background check requirement from KPMG’s HR department before the joining date – 01 September. In addition to this, they may also call you for feedback on my previous role. I will look forward to a positive response. Yours sincerely, Harjeet
Dear Mr Thomas,

Hope you’re doing well. I’m writing this letter regarding our discussion we had a week back on my decision of moving out and joining a new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
from
next
month onwards.

Thank you for considering my resignation and
Possible spelling mistake. 'finalising' is British English.
finalising
the release date
promptly
. As you are already aware, I was working as a Process Trainer with Fidelity Investments for one of the Retail Operations Team in India. My core job responsibilities were to ensure the internal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
for the department
is completed
in a timely manner and making sure that the standard operating procedures are up-to-date to be
Possible spelling mistake. 'utilised' is British English.
utilised
effectively
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
and reference purposes.

From
next
month, I will be joining KPMG as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Training
Manager and will be
mainly
responsible for conducting induction and orientation
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
for new staff members hired for any department across India. Though most of the key tasks will remain same as I had it here,
however
, it is an opportunity for me to learn how KPMG’s hiring process works and induction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
are
being conducted
as with Fidelity my scope
was limited
to the inter-department
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
.

As we have worked together for 4 years, I would like to request you to write a reference letter for me which is a mandatory background
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
requirement from KPMG’s HR department
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the joining date
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
01 September.
In addition
to this, they may
also
call you for feedback on my previous role.

I will look forward to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response.

Yours
sincerely
,
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Harjeet
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IELTS letter Letter on getting a reference letter

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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