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You have already booked a tour of London and for some reason you are not able to take the tour. Write an email to the travel agency and in your letter • introduce yourself • say why you cannot take the tour • apologize for the inconvenience caused. Write your letter in an appropriate style and format in150 words on your answer sheet

You have already booked a tour of London and for some reason you are not able to take the tour. Write an email to the travel agency and in your letter • introduce yourself • say why you cannot take the tour • apologize for the inconvenience caused. Write your letter in an appropriate style and format in150 words on your answer sheet NrBYq
Dear Sir. I am Anna Johnson. I am a resident of Tashkent city. I am a loyal traveller of your esteemed Airways Company. Last week I booked a ticket for March 12th, a flight to London from Tashkent on AI89. I am writing to request you that delaying my ticket's date to April 1st for some serious cases. Unfortunately, yesterday my father had to go for an immediate operation by chance and his health is menacing us. Tomorrow my flight takes off, however I would say that I can not fly as I and my family are in a difficult situation and we are caring about our dear person's condition. I strongly believe that you will understand me and could change my flight's date. I would appreciate if you could favour me in such hard times. I am looking forward to your prompt reply or feel free to phone me, please. +998934567890Yours faithfully.
Dear Sir. I am Anna Johnson. I am a resident of Tashkent city.
I
am a loyal
traveller
of your esteemed Airways
Company
. Last week I booked a ticket for March 12th, a flight to London from Tashkent on AI89. I am writing to request you that delaying my ticket's date to April 1st for
some
serious cases. Unfortunately, yesterday my father had to go for an immediate operation by chance and his health is menacing us. Tomorrow my flight takes off,
however
I would say that I can not
fly
as I and my family are in a difficult
situation and
we are caring about our dear person's condition. I
strongly
believe that you will understand me and could
change
my flight's date. I would appreciate if you could
favour
me in such
hard
times.
I
am looking forward to your prompt reply or feel free to phone me,
please
. +998934567890Yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter You have already booked a tour of London and for some reason you are not able to take the tour. Write an email to the travel agency and in your letter • introduce yourself • say why you cannot take the tour • apologize for the inconvenience caused. Write your letter in an appropriate style and format in150 words on your answer sheet

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  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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