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You have already booked a tour of London and for some reason you are not able to take the tour. Write an email to the travel agency and in your letter • introduce yourself • say why you cannot take the tour • apologize for the inconvenience caused. Write your letter in an appropriate style and format in150 words on your answer sheet

You have already booked a tour of London and for some reason you are not able to take the tour. Write an email to the travel agency and in your letter • introduce yourself • say why you cannot take the tour • apologize for the inconvenience caused. Write your letter in an appropriate style and format in150 words on your answer sheet NrBYq

Dear Sir. I am Anna Johnson. I am a resident of Tashkent city. I am a loyal traveller of your esteemed Airways Company. Last week I booked a ticket for March 12th, a flight to London from Tashkent on AI89. I am writing to request you that delaying my ticket's date to April 1st for some serious cases. Unfortunately, yesterday my father had to go for an immediate operation by chance and his health is menacing us. Tomorrow my flight takes off, however I would say that I can not fly as I and my family are in a difficult situation and we are caring about our dear person's condition. I strongly believe that you will understand me and could change my flight's date. I would appreciate if you could favour me in such hard times. I am looking forward to your prompt reply or feel free to phone me, please. +998934567890Yours faithfully.

Dear Sir. I am Anna Johnson. I am a resident of Tashkent city. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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traveller
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Company
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some
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 we are caring about our dear person's condition. I strongly
 believe that you will understand me and could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 my flight's date. I would appreciate if you could Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 me in such This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 times. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 am looking forward to your prompt reply or feel free to phone me, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
. +998934567890Yours faithfully
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IELTS letter You have already booked a tour of London and for some reason you are not able to take the tour. Write an email to the travel agency and in your letter • introduce yourself • say why you cannot take the tour • apologize for the inconvenience caused. Write your letter in an appropriate style and format in150 words on your answer sheet

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

153 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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