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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writting down this letter to express my dissatisfaction.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writting down this letter to express my dissatisfaction. 56lap
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writting down this letter to express my dissatisfaction. Since, my suitcase has been damaged after travelling in your bus for a long-distance. I have travelled in your company super deluxe bus on the 29th of April 2021 from Bangalore to Mumbai bearing the seat number 24L. My suitcase is a large, greenish in colour and has 2 pairs of zips. It is very important for me since that is the only luggage, I have it for my whole travelling. It is torned into 2 pieces and all the zips are worn out. When I saw the condition of my suitcase, I was terrified because it was lying completely open. I want the company to pay for the new suitcase because it one of my costliest suitcase and I have no other suitcase to pack my things for my return travel. I hope you will understand my situation. I look forward to hear from you. Yours Faithfully, John
Dear Sir or Madam, I am
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writting
down this letter to express my dissatisfaction. Since, my
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suitcase
has
been damaged
after travelling in your bus for
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a long-distance
. I have travelled in your
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company
super deluxe bus on the 29th of April 2021 from Bangalore to Mumbai bearing the seat number 24L. My
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suitcase
is a large,
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greenish in colour
and has 2 pairs of zips. It is
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very
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important
for me since
that is
the
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only
luggage, I have it for my whole travelling. It is
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torned
into 2 pieces and all the zips
are worn
out. When I
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saw
the condition of my
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suitcase
, I
was terrified
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because
it was lying completely open. I want the
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company
to pay for the new
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suitcase
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because
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it
one of my costliest
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suitcase
and I have no other
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suitcase
to pack my things for my return travel. I hope you will understand my situation.
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I
look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.

Yours
Faithfully
, John
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam, I am writting down this letter to express my dissatisfaction.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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