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You have decided to spend some time working this summer . You have seen an advertisement in the paper for lifeguards to work for a month on one of the beaches in Sussex. Write a letter asking to be considered for one of the positions.

You have decided to spend some time working this summer. You have seen an advertisement in the paper for lifeguards to work for a month on one of the beaches in Sussex. Write a letter asking to be considered for one of the positions. 9Q33n

Dear Sir I am writing to apply for the position of lifeguards on one of the beaches in Sussex. I have seen an advertisement in the paper. I graduated from the University of West London in 2005 with a degree in Maths. Thus, I have been working as a Maths teacher since 2006 at school. Which is based in Maths. Moreover, I worked as a travel agent for Tourist Agency. Because of this I am really into this job. In addition to, I know English well. Furthermore, I speak truly fluent French and Spanish. I am friendly organized and supremely patient. As a result I work under pressure As my reference shows, I have been immensely great guide to the people who specially asked for me to be their guide on tours they went on. I am always exremely interested by my clients and pupils as well. I have enclosed a copy of my CV. I would a glad to attend an interview at any time really convenient to you. Yours faithfully, Tom Smith.

Dear Sir

I am writing to apply for the position of lifeguards on one of the beaches in Sussex. I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 an advertisement in the paper.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 graduated from the University of West London in 2005 with a degree in Possible spelling mistake. 'Maths' is British English.Math
Maths
. Thus
, I have been working as a Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "Maths'" or "math's"?Maths'Math's
Maths
 teacher since 2006 at school. Which is based
 in Possible spelling mistake. 'Maths' is British English.Math
Maths
. Moreover
, I worked as a travel agent for Tourist Agency. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 of this I am really
 into this job. In addition
 to, I know English well. Furthermore
, I speak truly
 fluent French and Spanish.

I am friendly organized and supremely
 patient. As a result
 I work under pressure As my reference This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
, I have been immensely
 great guide to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who specially
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asked


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
for
 me to be their guide on tours they went on.

I am always Possible spelling mistake found.extremely
exremely
In English, people don't say "interested by'. They say, "interested in'.  Did you mean "interested in"?interested in
interested by
 my clients and pupils as well
.

I have enclosed a copy of my CV. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would a glad to attend an interview at any time really
 convenient to you.

Yours faithfully
, Tom Smith. 